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Helmholtz/full_poposal/TODO.txt

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-?? should I write something about the leadership training cost in the proposal?
+/?? should I write something about the leadership training cost in the proposal?
 
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-proposal text:
-comments by Anna
-+ milestones
+/proposal text:
+/comments by Anna
+/+ milestones
 
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Helmholtz/full_poposal/proposal_text/proposal.tex

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-The time line of the different work packages as well as the milestones are displayed as a Gantt diagram in Figure \ref{fig:timeplan}.
+The timeline of the different work packages as well as the milestones are displayed as a Gantt chart in Figure \ref{fig:timeplan}.
 For the project 6 milestones are defined, where the first milestone \textit{M1 - ``Impact of collective effects investigated''} concludes the investigation on the influence of collective effects on the particle distribution in RT beams within the accelerator in WP A1.
-The second milestone \textit{M2 - ``Start-to-end simulation implemented''} will be reached upon finalizing the start-to-end simulation in WP A3 including also the effects of collective effects on the beam-matter interaction (WP A2).
+The second milestone \textit{M2 - ``Start-to-end simulation implemented''} will be reached upon finalizing the start-to-end simulation in WP A3 including also the effects of collective effects during the beam-matter interaction (WP A2).
 The conclusion of the investigations on the pulse length dependence of diagnostics methods (WP B1 and B2.1+2) allows the recommendation of applicable diagnostics and represents the third milestone \textit{M3 - ``Recommendation of applicable diagnostics''}.
 The fourth milestone \textit{M4 - ``Beam modulation/shaping demonstrated''} is achieved by demonstrating the possibility for modulation or shaping of the particle distribution in the accelerator (WP C1).
 The implementation of a solution for the inverse problem (WP C3), to determine the required initial distribution for a custom final distribution on target, is a key milestone \textit{M5 - ``Solution to inverse problem implemented''}.
 Finally, successfully testing the generation of custom particle distributions on the target by combining the results from WP C1, C2 and C3 completes the final milestone \textit{M6 - ``Proof-of-Principle custom shapes on target reached''}.
 
 
-In the Gantt diagram, the individual work packages are color-coded according to the responsible team member. In the lower part of the figure, the planned time frame of each team member within the project is depicted.
+In the Gantt chart, the individual work packages are color-coded according to the responsible team member. In the lower part of the figure, the planned time frame of each team member within the project is depicted.
 The exact time plan may be subject to change, depending on the research progresses. Any significant deviations from the original time plan will be communicated to the Helmholtz Association, in order to guarantee the best outcome for the project.
 
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